Monday, April 9, 2012

Thesis Statement for Assignment 3

Through his raw and truthful lyrics about the so called “thug lifestyle” the songs on All Eyes On Me successfully combat racial and political dilemmas to reach out to the public through the use of gangster rap. 

1 comment:

  1. Great thesis statement! Since the first part of the sentence references "his" and "he," you do need to incorporate the name of the writer/lead singer, or else change these pronouns to "their" and "they" to indicate the work of the band as a whole.

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